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honeypot

Dragon-fly

Dragon-fly 

Like dragon-fly through stormy wind 
With wounds and scars on brittle wings 
You going, growing through the life, 
You know what disappointment means... 

So simple but so complicated, 
Snow-fire princess from my tale, 
You like an angel, like a demon, 
Can lift to heaven, hurl to hell... 

Like caterpillar in the cocoon, 
Will You become another, new? 
I hope for my unreal illusion, 
I see that want too much from You... 

Just want to see Your happy smile, 
Just want to wake this special drive, 
Just want to help and understand... 
BUT HOW CAN I BRING YOU TO LIFE?! 

But what to do and what to say 
For You, my girl, which cannot cry, 
My beautiful and tender Flower, 
My free and fickle Dragon-fly... 
30.12.2008 




Äîñë³âíèé ïåðåêëàä. 

Áàáêà ("ñòðåêîçà", ïî-ðîñ³éñüêè) 

ßê áàáêà ÷åðåç øòîðìîâ³ â³òðè, 
²ç ðàíàìè òà øðàìàìè íà êðèõêèõ êðèëàõ, 
Òè éäåø, ïðîðîñòàºø ÷åðåç æèòòÿ, 
Òè çíàºø, ùî òàêå ðîç÷àðóâàííÿ... 

Òàêà ïðîñòà ³ òàêà ñêëàäíà, 
Ñí³æíî-âîãíÿíà ïðèíöåñà ç ì êàçêè, 
Òè ÿê àíãåë, ÿê äåìîí, 
Ìîæåø ï³äíÿòè äî íåáåñ àáî ñêèíóòè ó ïåêëî... 

ßê ãóñåíèöÿ â êîêîí³, 
×è çìîæåø òè çì³íèòèñÿ, ñòàòè ³íøîþ? 
ß ñïîä³âàþñü íà ìîþ íåçä³éñíåííó ³ëþç³þ, 
Àëå áà÷ó, ùî ïðàãíó íàäòî áàãàòî â³ä Òåáå... 

Ïðîñòî õî÷ó áà÷èòè Òâîþ ùàñëèâó ïîñì³øêó, 
Ïðîñòî õî÷ó ðîçáóäèòè Òâîþ íåçâè÷àéíó øàëåí³ñòü, 
Ïðîñòî õî÷ó çðîçóì³òè ³ äîïîìîãòè... 
ÀËÅ ßÊ ÏÎÂÅÐÍÓÒÈ ÒÅÁÅ ÄÎ ÆÈÒÒß?! 

Àëå ùî ÿ ìîæó çðîáèòè ÷è ñêàçàòè 
Äëÿ Òåáå, ìîÿ ä³â÷èíêî, ÿêà âæå âèïëàêàëà âñ³ ñëüîçè, 
Ìîÿ ïðåêðàñíà ³ í³æíà Êâ³òêî, 
Ìîÿ â³ëüíà ³ ì³íëèâà Áàáêî... 



Ïîåòè÷íèé ïåðåêëàä, åêñïåðèìåíò ç ôîðìîþ ³ ðèìàìè. 

Áàáêà 

ËÅÒÈØ 
Ìîâ áàáêà, ç â³òðîì áîðþ÷èñü çàâçÿòî, 
ÕÎÂÀªØ 
Êðèëà Òè ïîñ³÷åí³ ñâî¿ 
ÆÈÂÅØ 
×åðåç æèòòÿ ó쳺ø ïðîðîñòàòè, 
² ÇÍÀªØ 
Ðîç÷àðóâàííÿ ñìàê ã³ðêèé íà æàëü... 

ÏÐÎÑÒÀ 
Õî÷à ñêëàäí³øî¿ ÷èì Òè íåìàº, 
ÏÐÈÍÖÅÑÀ 
Âîãîíü ³ êðèãà ³ç ì êàçêè, 
ßÊ ÀÍÃÅË 
Òè äî íåáåñ îñÿéíèõ ï³ä³éìàºø, 
ßÊ ÄÅÌÎÍ 
Ñêèäàºø â ïåêëî, çàâäàºø ïîðàçêè... 

ÌΠÃÓѲÍÜ 
Çàêðèëàñü â êîêîí³ ñâî¿õ ñòðàæäàíü, 
ÌÅÒÅËÈÊÎÌ 
Òè êàæåø, íå çëåòèø í³êîëè. 
²ËÞÇ²Þ 
Ëèø ìàþ, ïë³ä ñâî¿õ áàæàíü, 
ÁÀÃÀÒÎ 
Íàäòî áàãàòî ÿ â³ä Òåáå âèìàãàþ... 

ÓÑ̲ØÊÓ 
Ùàñëèâó õî÷ó áà÷èòè Òâîþ, 
ØÀËÅͲÑÒÜ 
Ðîçáóäèòè, ùî ³ ìåðòâîãî ï³äí³ìå, 
ÄÎÏÎÌÎÃÒÈ 
ϳäòðèìàòü õî÷ó ó ñêëàäí³ì áîþ, 
² ÏÎÂÅÐÍÓÒÜ 
Ò³ ðàäîù³ æèòòÿ, ÿê³ äàâíî çàáóëà... 

ÑÊÀÇÀÒÈ 
Ùî ÿ ñêàçàòè ìàþ ³ çðîáèòè 
ÄËß ÒÅÁÅ? 
Íå ïîâåðíóòè âèïëàêàí³ ñëüîçè... 
ÒÈ Ê²ÒÊÀ 
ßêó ïîòð³áíî áåðåãòè â ìîðîçè, 
ÒÈ ÁÀÁÊÀ 
Ñòð³ëîþ â³ëüíà â íåáî ïîëåò³òè... 
11.02.2009

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Ðóáðèêà: Ïîåç³ÿ, ³ðø³, ùî íå óâ³éøëè äî ðóáðèêè
äàòà íàäõîäæåííÿ: 02.03.2009 10:31:38
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³ðà Äóò÷àê, 12.08.2012 - 02:22
ÊÐÓÒÎ!!!!!!!!! give_rose give_rose give_rose
 
Ïîðîõ, 05.05.2009 - 00:22
Îöåíêà ïîýòà: 5
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Êàòÿ Àíäðèåíêî, 06.03.2009 - 18:51
Îöåíêà ïîýòà: 5
ÒÀËÀÍÒËÈÂÎ!!!! 12
 
Erebos Darkness â³äïîâ³â íà êîìåíòàð $previous_title_comm, 01.01.1970 - 03:00
À îøèáêè â àíãë. âàðèàíòå åñòü?
À òî ÿ â ôèç-ìàò êëàññå ó÷èëñÿ... biggrin
Ìàëî ëè ÷òî...
 
Àíäðåé Øòàëü, 03.03.2009 - 23:08
Îöåíêà ïîýòà: 5
À Âû, áàòåíüêà, ïîëèãëîò... smile
 
Erebos Darkness â³äïîâ³â íà êîìåíòàð $previous_title_comm, 01.01.1970 - 03:00
Ñòàðàþñü. biggrin tongue biggrin
 
Lorenzia, 03.03.2009 - 19:17
Îöåíêà ïîýòà: 5
12 áîëüøå âñåãî ïîñëåäíèé âàðèàíò ïîíðàâèëñÿ!!!
 
Erebos Darkness â³äïîâ³â íà êîìåíòàð $previous_title_comm, 01.01.1970 - 03:00
biggrin
 
ѳíîì³ Ðà, 03.03.2009 - 12:56
Îöåíêà ïîýòà: 5
îãî, ó ìåíÿ íåò ñëîâ. ÄÎ ÷åãî ÷åòêî è êðàñèâî.  ýòîì êàê ãîâîðèòñÿ"÷òî òî åñòü è ýòî ÷òî òî ÿâíî âåëèêî" 12
 
Erebos Darkness â³äïîâ³â íà êîìåíòàð $previous_title_comm, 01.01.1970 - 03:00
Ñïàñèáî! apple give_rose biggrin
 

ÄÎ ÂÓÑ ñèíîí³ìè
Ñèíîí³ì äî ñëîâà:  çáàãíóòè
Ñóìàðåâ: - Ïðèéòè äî
Çíàéòè íåñëîâíèêîâ³ ñèíîí³ìè äî ñëîâà:  Âèêëèê
Þõíèöÿ ªâãåí: -
Ñèíîí³ì äî ñëîâà:  Ïîæåæíèê
GoldKing: - Áàâîâíÿ́ð
Ñèíîí³ì äî ñëîâà:  Ïîæåæíèê
Íàòàëÿ Õàììîóäà: - Âîãíåãàñ.
Ñèíîí³ì äî ñëîâà:  Ïîæåæíèê
Ìèðîñëàâ Õîðâàò: - âîãíåáîðåöü
Ñèíîí³ì äî ñëîâà:  çáàãíóòè
Ñâ³òëàíà Áåðåçíÿê: - óñâ³äîìèòè, çäîãàäàòèñÿ, ÂÒÎÐÎÏÀÒÈ
Çíàéòè íåñëîâíèêîâ³ ñèíîí³ìè äî ñëîâà:  Ïîæåæíèê
Þõíèöÿ ªâãåí: -
Ñèíîí³ì äî ñëîâà:  çáàãíóòè
Âàëåíòèíà Ðæåâñêàÿ: - ïðèéíÿòè ðîçóìîì
Ñèíîí³ì äî ñëîâà:  çáàãíóòè
Âàëåíòèíà Ðæåâñêàÿ: - îñÿãíóòè ðîçóìîì
Ñèíîí³ì äî ñëîâà:  çáàãíóòè
ÂÀËÅÍÒÈÍÀV: - Äîäàòè ãëóçäó
Ñèíîí³ì äî ñëîâà:  ãàðíà (íå ³ç ñëîâíèê³â)
Îëåêñà Óäàéêî: - ;) çàøèá³ñü...
Ñèíîí³ì äî ñëîâà:  ³ä÷óæåííÿ
Ãîðîäíÿíñüêèé: - óñàì³òíåííÿ
Ñèíîí³ì äî ñëîâà:  ãàðíà (íå ³ç ñëîâíèê³â)
Neteka: - Êðàñíà, ôàéíà
Çíàéòè íåñëîâíèêîâ³ ñèíîí³ìè äî ñëîâà:  Áëàñò³íã
˳ñíèê: - Äóæå ïîòóæíà ï³ñêîñòðóìåíåâà îáðîáêà ïîâåðõí³
Çíàéòè íåñëîâíèêîâ³ ñèíîí³ìè äî ñëîâà:  Àâ³çî
˳ñíèê: - ô³íàíñîâèé äîêóìåíò ç áàíê³âñüêî¿ ñôåðè
Ñèíîí³ì äî ñëîâà:  Áóòûëêà
Svitlana_Belyakova: - ïëÿøêà
Ñèíîí³ì äî ñëîâà:  ãîâîðèòè
Svitlana_Belyakova: - áàçiêàòè
Ñèíîí³ì äî ñëîâà:  çáàãíóòè
Svitlana_Belyakova: - äîòëóìà÷èòè
Ñèíîí³ì äî ñëîâà:  ãîâîðèòè
Svitlana_Belyakova: - ëÿñêàòè ÿçèêîì
Çíàéòè íåñëîâíèêîâ³ ñèíîí³ìè äî ñëîâà:  Îïîâçåíü
Þõíèöÿ ªâãåí: -
Ñèíîí³ì äî ñëîâà:  ãàðíà (íå ³ç ñëîâíèê³â)
Îëåêñà Óäàéêî: - xo÷ ç ëèöÿ âîäó nèé! :P
Ñèíîí³ì äî ñëîâà:  ³ä÷óæåííÿ
dashavsky: - Ðåêåò.
Ñèíîí³ì äî ñëîâà:  ³ä÷óæåííÿ
Ìàêñèì Òàðàñ³âñüêèé: - çíåïðèâëàñíåííÿ
Çíàéòè íåñëîâíèêîâ³ ñèíîí³ìè äî ñëîâà:  ³ä÷óæåííÿ
Enol: -
Ñèíîí³ì äî ñëîâà:  ãîâîðèòè
Mattias Genri: - Ïàòÿ́êàòè
Ñèíîí³ì äî ñëîâà:  ³÷í³ñòü
Mattias Genri: - Âíåáóòòÿ́
Ñèíîí³ì äî ñëîâà:  ³÷í³ñòü
Mattias Genri: - Âíå÷à́ñí³ñòü
Ñèíîí³ì äî ñëîâà:  çáàãíóòè
Mattias Genri: - äîòó́ìêàòè
Ñèíîí³ì äî ñëîâà:  ãîâîðèòè
Mattias Genri: - Òåðåíä³òè
Ñèíîí³ì äî ñëîâà:  ãàðíà (íå ³ç ñëîâíèê³â)
Mattias Genri: - Ôàéíà
Ñèíîí³ì äî ñëîâà:  ãîâîðèòè
boroda-64: - ÍÜÎÐÊÀÒÈ
Ñèíîí³ì äî ñëîâà:  çáàãíóòè
Ïàíòåë³é Ëþá÷åíêî: - Äî³íñàéòèòè.
Ñèíîí³ì äî ñëîâà:  ³÷í³ñòü
Ïàíòåë³é Ëþá÷åíêî: - Òå, ùî íàñ ïåðåæèâå. ʳíöÿ ÷îãî ìè íå ïîáà÷èìî.
Ñèíîí³ì äî ñëîâà:  ³÷í³ñòü
Ñîô³ÿ Ïàñ³÷íèê: - Áåç÷àñîâ³ñòü
Çíàéòè íåñëîâíèêîâ³ ñèíîí³ìè äî ñëîâà:  ³äïîâ³äàëüí³ñòü
Enol: -
Ñèíîí³ì äî ñëîâà:  Íîâèé
Neteka: - Íåçíîøåíèé
Ñèíîí³ì äî ñëîâà:  Íîâèé
oreol: - ùîéíî âèãîòîâëåíèé
Ñèíîí³ì äî ñëîâà:  Íàâ³òü
oreol: - "³ ..."
Ñèíîí³ì äî ñëîâà:  Áóòûëêà
Ïàíòåë³é Ëþá÷åíêî: - Ïóçèð.
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