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Ïðîùàâàéòå!ß íàâ÷èëàñü ë³òàòè…
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Ùå îäèí êðîê â òåìíîò³,
Ùå îäíå ïóñòå ñëîâî.
Çíîâó ñïàëÿòü äóøó ò³,
Õòî ïîÿâèâñÿ â æèòò³ âèïàäêîâî.
Ùå îäíå ñëîâî ïðîùàé,
Ùå îäí³ ñëüîçè ìîâ÷àííÿ.
Çíîâó ñêàæó «Âèáà÷àé,
Öÿ çóñòð³÷ áóëà îñòàííÿ»
Ùå îäèí êðîê...çóïèíèñü!
Ìîº ñåðöå-çà÷èíåí³ äâåð³.
Òè ó ñë³ä ìåí³ íå äèâèñü,
Áî ïîæîâêëî âæå ëèñòÿ ó ñêâåð³.
Íå çíàéäåø òè ìåíå â ñâî¿õ ñíàõ,
² áëàãàþ, íå ïîòð³áíî øóêàòè
Ìîÿ äóøà â³ëüíèé ïòàõ.
Ïðîùàâàéòå!!!ß íàâ÷èëàñü ë³òàòè...
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Ðóáðèêà: Ïîåç³ÿ, ˳ðèêà
äàòà íàäõîäæåííÿ: 10.10.2011 17:30:38
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