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Ïàì'ÿòàºø – òè ïðèíîñèø çîð³,
Ïîëèâàºø ñåðåä ðàþ êâ³òè,
² ïðèõîäèø â ñíè ìî¿ ïðîçîð³.
Òè – ëþáîâ. ×îãî òîá³ áîë³òè?
Òè - çàâæäè. ×îìó ãëóõå ñüîãîäí³
Íàëÿãëî ³ çìóñèëî ìîâ÷àòè,
Ùî êðè÷àòü çà íàñ í³ì³ áåçîäí³.
Òè – ëþáîâ. ×îãî òîá³ âìèðàòè?
Ãàñíóòè çîëîþ ì³æ çîëè.
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Ðóáðèêà: Ïîåç³ÿ, ˳ðèêà êîõàííÿ
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Âêàæ³òü ïðè÷èíó âàøî¿ ñêàðãè
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Æóðàâêà, ß º ÿ., Àíàòîë³éîâè÷, Quadro.Tony, Òåòÿíà Çàïîðîæåöü, Çîÿ ѳðîìàõà, dada_, Îëåêñàíäðà ×åðíÿê, Ëþáà Âàñèëèê, Ìèõàéëî Ïëîñêîâ³òîâ |
| Ïðî÷èòàíèé óñ³ìà â³äâ³äóâà÷àìè (1831) |
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äÿêóþ, äóæå ðàäà öå ÷óòè
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äÿêóþ äóæå !
Õîðîøåå ñòèõîòâîðåíèå. Íî â ìîåì ñîçíàíèè ïòèöà ôåíèêñ íå ñâÿçàíà ñ ëþáîâüþ.
Ìíå êóäà áëèæå Æàð-ïòèöà.
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Ñïàñèáî, Àíäðåé!
Ñíà÷àëà ñòèõîòâîðåíèå íèêàê íå íàçûâàëîñü, íî ïîòîì ÿ ðåøèëà äàòü åìó ýòî íàçâàíèå, ïîòîìó ÷òî â ìèôîëîãèè ìíîãèõ íàðîäîâ (êàæåòñÿ, â îñíîâíîì, åâðîïåéñêèõ) ôåíèêñ ÿâëÿåòñÿ ñèìâîëîì áåññìåðòèÿ.  ìîåì ïîíèìàíèè ëþáîâü - ýòî èìåííî òî, ÷òî âñåãäà âîçðîæäàåòñÿ èç ïåïëà
À æàð-ïòèöó òîæå î÷åíü ëþáëþ, íî å¸ çíà÷åíèå êàê èäåè ìíå íå âïîëíå ïîíÿòíî.
È âîîáùå, èçó÷åíèå ñêàçî÷íûõ ñèìâîëîâ ðàçíûõ íàðîäîâ â ïîñëåäíåå âðåìÿ ñòàëî ìîèì ëþáèìûì çàíÿòèåì. Áëàãîäàðÿ âàøåìó Ìóòàáîðó ÿ ïîçíàêîìèëàñü ñî ñêàçêîé î êàëèôå-àèñòå - î÷åíü ïîíðàâèëàñü!
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