Do you hate America?
By Victor Hudson 2016
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Do you hate America?
I know you do.
You are so sure of yourself.
You think you know all there is to know.
But I know what you really are.
And I know that you know it too.
And that's why you hate America.
Hey, you are wrong, pal. Those, who are clever enough to read and understand your poem, are as clever to respect this mighty state, the stronghold of democracy!
By the way - "sure of yourself" sounds awful. "Self-confident" is the word.
Thanx, man. I understand you wrote this with the best of intentions, but this poem, first and foremost, brings message to the enemies of the US, not friends. "Sure of yourself" is a correct expression and much better than "self-confident": there is a big difference between poems and newspaper articles you should know that if you consider yourself a poet.